Victoria: Wreck the Journal
1. Loved the stop motion that must have taken a lot of time. Really nice job.
2. Wish I could have seen the rest I was really getting into it when it stopped.
3. The music matches really well with PS, it seemed like a proffesional video.
4. Overall great job, puts our video to shame.
Katherine: Fire Station
The music goes really well with your PS, especially the fire engines at the beggining but I'm not sure what kind of story you're trying to tell. The pictures didn't have a ton of flow between them, it was sort of just a bunch of pictures thrown together. However the action pics were really powerful, and the overall presentation was interesting.
Joel: My Family
I enjoyed the pictures of different events instead of just one event. The music made sense, especially at the end with "The edge of Glory." Really good idea with the memorium, it just went by really fast.
Lary and Lennys
I'm seeing a lot of pictures with the two of you in them wich leads to the question, who took those? The ending was extremely abrupt. But good job.
Spirit Week
The first pictures were really dark couldn't see much in them. Seemed kind of thrown together since almost ALL of the pictures were of pajama day, with like three twin day pictures. You could have taken pictures of the spirit walls instead of just people, or even of some of the sports. Some repeats of pictures.
Dylan: Two Dogs
You told a story unlike the other PS so good job on that. The music ended abruptly though.
Vern and Justin
Extremely short. Naylors "stop-motion" was weird and jerky. But it told a story so..... there's that.
Riley and Christie: Fish Days
Extremely simple (not neccesarily a bad thing). I really like the shark eating the fish. Wish you would have spent more time on the video though you could have done a lot more with it.
Volleyball
Wasn't a huge fan of the re-use of pictures and the darkness of the pictures in the beginning. The music didn't make any sense with the video. Liked the fight though.
Recycling
That was really good, the stop motion must have taken forever. I like the change of clothes and the antics during the recylcing shennanigans.
Graduation
Pictures jumped by really fast, but only PS that was actually about something meaningful.
American Adventure
Good story.
Just Lose It
The timing with the song was pretty good, your editing was perfect.
Cardinals
I need to see a works cited page for this.
1. Loved the stop motion that must have taken a lot of time. Really nice job.
2. Wish I could have seen the rest I was really getting into it when it stopped.
3. The music matches really well with PS, it seemed like a proffesional video.
4. Overall great job, puts our video to shame.
Katherine: Fire Station
The music goes really well with your PS, especially the fire engines at the beggining but I'm not sure what kind of story you're trying to tell. The pictures didn't have a ton of flow between them, it was sort of just a bunch of pictures thrown together. However the action pics were really powerful, and the overall presentation was interesting.
Joel: My Family
I enjoyed the pictures of different events instead of just one event. The music made sense, especially at the end with "The edge of Glory." Really good idea with the memorium, it just went by really fast.
Lary and Lennys
I'm seeing a lot of pictures with the two of you in them wich leads to the question, who took those? The ending was extremely abrupt. But good job.
Spirit Week
The first pictures were really dark couldn't see much in them. Seemed kind of thrown together since almost ALL of the pictures were of pajama day, with like three twin day pictures. You could have taken pictures of the spirit walls instead of just people, or even of some of the sports. Some repeats of pictures.
Dylan: Two Dogs
You told a story unlike the other PS so good job on that. The music ended abruptly though.
Vern and Justin
Extremely short. Naylors "stop-motion" was weird and jerky. But it told a story so..... there's that.
Riley and Christie: Fish Days
Extremely simple (not neccesarily a bad thing). I really like the shark eating the fish. Wish you would have spent more time on the video though you could have done a lot more with it.
Volleyball
Wasn't a huge fan of the re-use of pictures and the darkness of the pictures in the beginning. The music didn't make any sense with the video. Liked the fight though.
Recycling
That was really good, the stop motion must have taken forever. I like the change of clothes and the antics during the recylcing shennanigans.
Graduation
Pictures jumped by really fast, but only PS that was actually about something meaningful.
American Adventure
Good story.
Just Lose It
The timing with the song was pretty good, your editing was perfect.
Cardinals
I need to see a works cited page for this.
Conrad football